The zesty lemon
I ate a zesty lemon
from my sister on a dare
A splat of lemon splashed my eyes
And then I Fell down the stair
My teeth went tingly
And started to hurt
That pain was so sore
Then I played in the dirt
My face had mixed emotions
My face turned red
Then went squishy
While I was In Bed
Then my cousin asked me
Do you want or need another one?
Know I do not.
Awesome Job Kalae. You did a great job with rhyming and making it cool. My favourite sentence was when you wrote that my face turned red then went squishy while I was in bed. Great Job Kalae keep up the great work
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ReplyDeleteGreat Job Kalae. Awesome job with rhyming it made it better. I liked how you made it a Zesty lemon not a really sour lolly or something else. My favourite line was My face had mixed emotions My face turned red.
ReplyDeleteWell done