Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, June 10, 2016

The Sad dog



    

    


 HELP!!!!
Sad dog
Dear world,
Help I have been caged up for over 3 years, please help me I have no food except one piece of bread a day, and I only have five teaspoons of water a day. We do not get much sleep because the dog owners kick me and yell at me and the only time I get to sleep is when the owners oldest daughter works there. Please help I need a home that is safe and will not treat me like this.
        I AM HEART💔

Exaggeration poem

The zesty lemon

I ate a zesty lemon
from my sister on a dare
A splat of lemon splashed my eyes
And then I Fell down the stair


My teeth went tingly
And started to hurt
That pain was so sore
Then I played in the dirt


My face had mixed emotions
My face turned red
Then went squishy
While I was In Bed


Then my cousin asked me
Do you want or need another one?
Know I do not.

Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Project based Learning


Project Based Learning Blog Post Kalae

Step One
Selecting a context
Lost in the Bush
Save the Bush
Fun in the Bush
Step Two & Three
Create questions and identify one broad question
What was your broad question?
How do we know what is poisonous in the bush?
Step Four
What did I already know about my question?
  1. That some mushrooms can be poisonous
  2. That some flowers can be poisonous
  3. That some of these poisonous things can be killing our native animals
Step Five
Design your creation
IMG_0079.JPGOur creation was called a trap. This is what we needed to make are trap: Wood, cardboard, paint, glue, screws, wire, paper, ping pong ball, and paint brushes
Step Six
Build your creation
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Step Seven
Reflection
How did it go?  Charlotte and I thought that it went well but if we did it another time  we would have changed the box to a smaller size.
What went well?
Charlotte and I thought that some things went to plan and some did not. Like when we were making the trap we had to make a decision on if we were going to paint the box or not.
What was a challenge?
The most challenging part of making the trap was when you had to put the wire into the sides of the trap because when the animal comes in the door might not close if it was not made probably.
Step Eight
Evaluate
What would you change next time?
The size of the box because we thought that the box size was to big for something that was just a model.l
What would you improve next time? The size of the box because we thought that the box was to big.
Feedback - ask some other children what they thought?
Ruby = Maybe think about your spelling and I loved your creation and I like how you have put a lot of detail into this blog. Well done :)!
Makayla = I like how you used Green & Brown for camouflage on it so creatures don’t see it :D
Henrietta = Great Job on your trap I loved how you did it camouflage so it blends in so the animals don’t even think it is there
Livy =I love how you camouflaged your trap that was very smart of you and I like the topic you choose

Monday, April 6, 2015

Super Hero Day

What a great day we had at school on Friday because we all dressed up as a

super hero from a book or a character. My super hero was a bat cat,  my super power uses a whip so if you are a baddie she can whip you with it.  
It will leave a red line across your butt.
Henrietta won the compertion for the best costume, she came as a lady who is a surfer and she got her arm bitten of from a shark and she is still helping kids to love the water. I thought that she would come first anyway.

Wednesday, February 25, 2015

OLIVE RICH

My superhero lives in a house that is invisible so if a burglar comes to steal something it won’t know where they are going.  BUT...Olive knows where she is going through because she can press a button on a remote.  She made it all by herself in a beautiful land called America.


My superhero has red short shorts on and an aqua coloured top, on that it has a logo that says s.  She has blue gloves and holds a red sword.  Olive Rich also wears black high heels, Olive’s skin is as brown as a meat pattie in a cheese burger.  Olive also has dark blue big rubber bands around her.  Olive has a mask that is plain black and she also wears a silver head band and on the front of it she has a daisy.  She also has these enormous bright purple wings that are bigger than me.


Olive is a caring, kind, helpful and of course loving.  She protects her town from robbers and stupid people.  She also looks after her little sister and loves her as well as looks out for her as well.