HELP!!!!
Sad dog
Dear world,
Help I have been caged up for over 3 years, please help me I have no food except one piece of bread a day, and I only have five teaspoons of water a day. We do not get much sleep because the dog owners kick me and yell at me and the only time I get to sleep is when the owners oldest daughter works there. Please help I need a home that is safe and will not treat me like this.
I AM HEART💔
I love how it sounded like you were in the shoes of the dog and expressed how you would feel if that was you.
ReplyDeleteHenrietta :)
Poor dog I hope it finds a better home
ReplyDeleteWell done kalae! I really like how you persuaded me to try and save these animals. I think you did well with talking like you were the dog. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteWell done kalae i like how you tried to preusade the reader about the puppy being locked in that cage for over 3 year
ReplyDeleteOh.I hope the dog finds a home.
ReplyDeleteOh so sad I hope the dog finds a home. I like how you try to preusade the reader because it is good for the pat to have a better home.
ReplyDeleteHi Kalae well done it sounds really sad but the way you add so much detail it made me cry a little bit so much vocab, detail and punctuation well done
ReplyDeletethats a cute dog kalae great work
ReplyDeleteThat is a good bit of witting.
ReplyDeleteI like all the description you put in it. It looks like you put lots off time and efert in the sad dog writing. I like the part when you said help iv been caged for over 3 years.
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