WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion. This is the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:
- I plan for a writing task
- I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
- Give reasons with detail - use specific words
- I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
- I use capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
- Use persuasive language
I think country life is better than city life
In my opinion I think that country life is better than city life
I think that country life is better than city life because there are more native trees and plants. I believe that native trees could be used for huts and I also believe that plants could be used for hide and go seek and other games.
You can experience different things about plants, you may think to yourself one day, I wonder what this plant is called and that would be amazing to find out about. You also may find sticks, leaves, pine cones etc. Then you could make wall hangings or something for your parents.
You can also learn new things that you never knew about. You can explore the countryside and go down massive streams and waterfalls. When you are having long walks you may find little creatures and big ones. You might find ladybirds, caterpillars, hedgehogs etc. Maybe you would think to your self I think that country life is better than city life too.
I think that country life is better than city life.
I like your detail Kalae that you have included in each paragraph, especially the bit about the streams, waterfalls and what you might find on a walk. Next time you could use more persuasive language sentence starters. Well done Kalae.
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